Young Writers Society

Well, just one so far, and it's neither colored nor inked, but it's still cool. This is a pic of all the main characters as well as a few Wabbles and a Mengunuo. See if you can figure out which is which: The Hero, The Anti-Hero, The Knight Captain, The Princess/Lead Female Character, The Boy Genius Wizard, The Brat Girl, The Bounty Hunter, The Hungry One, the Wabbles, and the Mengunuo.

Oh wow this si so great. Its like some sort of poster... EEK A MOUSE... anyway, i see a little bunny thing in the left corner.. it's so ADORABLE is it a wabble?
Everything else I'm figuring out now... kinda... *distracted*

That's so awesome, Bobo! I love it!

Did you add more since the sneak peek?

Yeah, about half of the characters. Well, at least the two girls in the tree and the frog guy behind.

It is very good! But it needs some work on the whole body bit. I really love the idea and I could never be bothered to draw all that! xD

Whole body bit? What do you mean?

She's saying that you need to work on bodies. Anyway, I LOVE this! It's soo cool! Final Fantasy rawks!

I was playing final fantasy and I just realised that it does rawk! I mean, when fighting and they use these animal people things (sorry dont know) their attacks are amazing! The whole game is amazing... Im already stuck :l

ANWAY:
Yes, lollipop just explained it all. She's clever xD

Well, the bodies are probably supposed to be that way. Could you be specific so I can know whether to fix it or leave it how it is? Man, where's Hunter when you need him? lol

Yes, youve identified the problem good job, now if you know the problem and you dont know how to fix it, what good is it?

www.saveloomis.org

read up, it helps

The whole anatomy is wrong, meaning you need to make a light skeleton outline of the body. It can help alot. After that you are meant to make shapes out of the body, like a circle for the head, and so on. Then you do the body shape and the clothes and facial features next, then the shading. Sorry if I can't help you lots.

Go to: http://forums.megatokyo.com/

Post your picture there and they will help you alot at your work.

I see no problem with the bodies...theyr super deformed to be sure, but thats how they should be.

Hah! That's why I did this cartoony style- so I wouldn't have to worry about getting everything right. Cartoon characters are rarely in the right proportions or anything.

Thats what I said, then I got bored...
Huh... Ironic...