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These are pictures that I took of some butterflies

http://ryan46.deviantart.com/art/Old-Butterfly-95261167

http://ryan46.deviantart.com/art/Butter ... d-95260571

http://ryan46.deviantart.com/art/Mohawk ... y-95259932

http://ryan46.deviantart.com/art/flying ... y-95102663

http://ryan46.deviantart.com/art/pretty ... y-95102540

I love the second one the most. I like the color of the butterfly.

They're very nice actually. ^_^ My personal favorite would have to be the first one. I don't know if it's the way you took the picture or the actual butterfly itself, but it had such an intersting shape to its wings which really caught me eye.

Overall they're nice, simple photos of butterflies.

[s]BlackGhost[/s]

I like the last two pics most. Second to last because the background seems blurry and it emphasises the butterfly. Last one because the colors are really nice.

Pretty Pictures, sporty!

im a sucker for butterflies since my grandma loves them!n

anyway i like the last three
mainly because they were all detailed closer up and blury far away
it makes a cool effect

the second one was really good
because there wasn't much to distract you from the butterfly

i am curious how you got close enough to take these pictures or did u just use zoom

well. i took the pictures at a butterfly museum were you could go into a room with them it is really cool becuase the butterflies land on you some times it was really cute because there was a butterfly on a little baby's hat i love that exhibit

butterflies are hard to capture. these were all really pretty butterflies!

keep in mind your subject. try not to have too many distracting things in the way of your photo (like leaves, branches, etc.) i know it's hard, but maybe focusing in more on the butterfly and getting a bigger shot would have made the pictures even more striking. you have some pretty good angles here, now try to capture the colors of the butterfly and its contrasts with its surroundings. don't let the butterfly get lost in the surrounding though!

bleh, i hope that's not a mean comment, and i don't even know if you wante a critique, but =x. they really were nice pictures.

thank you so much that really helps me i LOVE critiques so if you have any please let me know thank you again

Everything is good but most of the pictures are blurred. The only picture fully not blurred is the last one and first one. The second one's colors are good but the forth ones wings are moving as you took the pictures. Also the Mohawk butterfly is almost fully blurred. But still the angles were right and the setting were great so other than the blurring the pictures were A okay.

the forth one is very beautiful but i love them all,