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Sun Aug 17, 2008 4:16 am
Firearris says...



These were taken through the window, so they seem pretty good.
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[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard appears "We have weasels now!"
[Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel!
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard gives Firearris the Weasel.
[Firearris] 10:46 pm: aquires the weasel and renames it "Cat"

Take that, Lumi.
  





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Sun Aug 17, 2008 4:16 am
Firearris says...



Number two
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[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard appears "We have weasels now!"
[Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel!
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard gives Firearris the Weasel.
[Firearris] 10:46 pm: aquires the weasel and renames it "Cat"

Take that, Lumi.
  





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Sun Aug 17, 2008 10:46 pm
myfreindsavamp says...



These are huge! But beautiful.
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

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Sun Aug 17, 2008 10:59 pm
Clo says...



Wow. Those are way too big to get a decent look at. You should definitely shrink those puppies down using paint and the "resize" tool. That's what I typically do to resize my pictures.

From the look of it, the picture seems very grainy. One way to fix that is to, in whatever program you use, lower the "Sharpen" setting. If you have sharpen on a high setting, it will make the picture appear grainy. If it's low, it's more blurred.

Other than that, the colors are very nice. I liked scrolling down and seeing the changes in the shades of red/orange.

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Mon Aug 18, 2008 4:02 pm
Firearris says...



Sizes have now been reduced! :D
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard appears "We have weasels now!"
[Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel!
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard gives Firearris the Weasel.
[Firearris] 10:46 pm: aquires the weasel and renames it "Cat"

Take that, Lumi.
  





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Mon Aug 18, 2008 8:35 pm
Sportgurl46 says...



This is really pretty. but you can tell that you are taking the picture from a window because there is a slight glare. the angle kind of takes away from the beauty of the picture. but te rest of the picture looks really good :) good job :)
omg lol thx HD!
  





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Mon Aug 18, 2008 11:38 pm
Black Ghost says...



Although the colors in the sky are nice, the picture itself is a little boring. It would have been nice if you actually see part of the sun still, which would have made this picture a whole lot better in my opinion. Also, the trees seem to get in the way a little, and the random sillhouettes of cars in the corner isn't that great.

I would suggest maybe next time taking more care as to what ends up in the picture? There should be a main focus to every photograph, I think, and in here it feels as if the main focus of the picture is absent. *shrugs*

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Tue Aug 19, 2008 2:29 am
ChildofEden says...



I agree with a lot of what has been said here! The pictures are very beautiful, but it kind of takes away from them when they're blurry & huge. & like it has been said, I think I'd like it more if it was JUST the sunset, y'know? But the house lights or whatever those are at the bottom kind of take away from the effect.
Great job all in all though! Tootles!

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Thu Aug 21, 2008 9:07 pm
Chosenofair says...



It kind of looks like a fire is erupting behind the trees, you know? I agree that the angle and strange silhouettes detract from the overall beauty of the picture. But the fact that you got a shot like that out a window is amazing. That, I can't deny. Good job, overall.
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