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Fri Aug 15, 2008 2:12 pm
Lauren says...



This user has been banned and her works removed from YWS.
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Fri Aug 15, 2008 2:14 pm
Lauren says...



A pencil study of a 16th Century noblewoman.
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Fri Aug 15, 2008 2:15 pm
Lauren says...



If you could ignore the half-finished man. :)
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Fri Aug 15, 2008 7:28 pm
Black Ghost says...



I really liked the flowers. They looked very soft and breezy, which is very serene and beautiful looking.

But I think the noblewoman needs some work though. Her expression seems slightly off for some reason. I think maybe it's the positioning of her facial features? The cross also looks a bit bloated, and the necklace doesn't look like it's hanging on the neck at all.

The third one was okay, but the top part of her dress sort of looks like a pajama shirt or something.

Anyways, I'm interested in seeing what else you end up posting. ^_^

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Mon Aug 25, 2008 10:01 am
tdownes says...



Wow, Lauren. You really have a talent for the whole watercolour thing.
Out of all of these, I think the first one looks the most realistic [even though they are all very good :) ]
I'm not going to give you a full-blown art critique, because then you'll hold a grudge against me.
The third picture comes second -perhaps because it is in colour - as it seems more anatomically correct [meaning the features]. But she looks like she's been having a bit of a bad hair day, if you ask me...
As for the second picture... What's happened to her eyes?! They've been reduced to slits...
Don't worry. We all have bad art days. *pats shoulder sympathetically*
Anyway, these are all good.
I would love to see some more [no, really]
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