Young Writers Society

i took these while i was outside (obviously) but it is my first time posting pictures on here and i am really excited so please be as harsh as possible because i am hoping to start taking more pictures i know there is a lot, so you don't have to comment on all of them

http://ryan46.deviantart.com/art/cherries-94372021

http://ryan46.deviantart.com/art/sky-or-water-94371881

http://ryan46.deviantart.com/art/grass-94371546

http://ryan46.deviantart.com/art/nature ... y-94371060

http://ryan46.deviantart.com/art/lookin ... e-94372590

http://ryan46.deviantart.com/art/throug ... s-94372733

thank you for your time

I like them all but the second one. It's a bit bland. It needs more... umph if you wanna call it that. And I'm not much of an art crituqu anyways so yeah....

Byebye!

-amber

yeah, the second wasn't my favorite either, but i thought i would put it in there

Awesome! i loved your pictures.

1) I like how the red against the green leaf just seem to pop, but in the right hand upper corner theres a cherry that hangs oddly then at the corner of it a piece of a cherry that is attatched to the same stem and I think it might be a little distracting. Thats just my opion though.

2) This picture I am not wild about, but then again if you look at it for a while it's like looking up at the sky. Have you ever laid on your back and tried to make pictures in your mind of the clouds? Well it reminds me of that.

3) I love how the branches of the tree are twisting and the light is just right so you can see the shadow of the turning branch on a lower one.

4) This picture makes me feel like a child looking up at the tree. It's amazing how real it seems. Great job!

5) The branches that are bare in this picture seem to dirft off, but other than that i think this is my favorite picture. The way the leaves and branches are over lapping the clouds and bright blue sky give off a great textured veiw.

Over all you did a great job!

-Tiffany

I liked the last one the best! The sillohette of the tree branches against the blue sky is very fascinating. Hehe...

The second picture, the one of the sky, was okay, but you can make it more interesting.

The last three I absolutely adore! They're so pretty in so many ways. "Through the branches", like Hikari said, is fascinating. "Looking up the tree" makes me feel so small. And "Nature in all it's beauty" is gorgeous.

Keep 'em up, sporty!

And I like "sky or water" 'cause it makes me think. But it is kinda bland.