Young Writers Society

Tarnished.

how i wish i could draw like that
The bottom is beautiful, but the top twilight thing is a bit eek

unsterblichkeit36 wrote:how i wish i could draw like that
The bottom is beautiful, but the top twilight thing is a bit eek

Yeah haha I know! I got so angry and I was tired lol XD

Im going to be COMPLETELY HONEST. I am a huuuge fan of Twilight, I even go to Stephanie Meyer concerts and book release parties, And yes, Im a boy. I happen to enjoy a good vampire/romance
Now that I got that out of the way, Ill be completely honest (again) I dont really like this drawing. Its a bit bland and could certainly use work. It amatuer in my honest opinion. Keep on working though!

SIC wrote:Im going to be COMPLETELY HONEST. I am a huuuge fan of Twilight, I even go to Stephanie Meyer concerts and book release parties, And yes, Im a boy. I happen to enjoy a good vampire/romance
Now that I got that out of the way, Ill be completely honest (again) I dont really like this drawing. Its a bit bland and could certainly use work. It amatuer in my honest opinion. Keep on working though!

Haha it's okay it's just of my enjoyment of drawing

It's not a bad idea in the least (though, remember that I don't know twilight and can't comment on it's relevence to the book). It's a pretty good start I think. You definitely have some skill!

A few suggestions:
-Consider using some darker shading. The shading so far is, as I mentioned, a great start. But, it could stand to be a bit dark simple so that the outerlines don't stick out as much as she do now.
-erase the random pencil makes. when using lead, it's very easy to smudge a drawing and end up with smudges all over the page. a lot of time normal pencil erasers will do the trick, but if they don't there are some very decent erasers you can find at craft stores that will work perfectly (though, definitely do not purchase/use a pink eraser. i suggest either tan or white. pink will literally leave pink marks instead of the smudge marks--not very helpful that way!)
-add some color. from what i've seen of the twilight covers, the background is always black and the picture is colorful as all getout. bright, bold colors. use them! :]


Great start! :]

although i am not a twilight fan i have seen the covers
and they actually have nothing to do with the story

there is alot of smudges which can always be erased

when i zoomed in i did see the initials of EB (edward and bella)
dont hide it in the shadows

it might look better is you made it thicker
that way your kind of making a bold statement

since the book basically is edward and bellas awkward relationship

hope this helped

Um... I can't see it?

I do not like the book Twilight that much, but, looking at artistic abilities that is pretty good. I would suggest using color or making the black darker. There are also some smudges that stand out.

But I shouldn't be pointing out all that considering that it is 800 times better than I could do.

Anyways, good job.

Nice fonts and picture though you should have tried to erase the pencil marks you didn't want to keep in the picture by either scanning it and then using a picture software to edit it or you should just try erasing the parts you don't want. Of course that's not a must its just a may.

Even without doing it the picture is excellent. Nicely done.