Young Writers Society

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This is a very evil character from one of my novels that has not actually been written yet... [but, obviously, I plan to]
This must have taken me, oh... about forty-five minutes, I think
[[s]sorry for the awkward size of the picture, people[/s]] No fear. A link is here:

http://sky-lily2.deviantart.com/art/He- ... s-97100608

It really isn't my best, though...
Critiques appreciated!

wow this is really good i only have a few things:

1) if you could try and bring the size down then this would be easier to review.

2) if you could try shading this more then it would make it look even more amazing

3) i love the whole dragon with a ball thing my dad used to make them and i have always loved them

4) if you wouldn't have told me that this was an evil character than i would have never guessed it. try making the eyes more narrow. that will make him look evil.

i like that you made him because of a book that you are going to write i always like to see how the authors see their characters all in all this is an amazing drawing and you have a lot of talent if you have any questions about my critique please pm me

hope this helps

happy drawing

Thank you much, Sportgurl46
Yes, about the size, I re-scaled it and everything, but when I attached it,it really didn't seem any smaller...
This actually is a very darkly shaded picture, but the scanner faded it... [stupid scanner..]
And yes, that 'ball thing' is a vital object in my story. It's an orb, but I won't go on otherwise I will ruin the story.

And yes, you will be hearing more from me...

Wondrous, Thea. Marvelous! Too big, though --- maybe you should get your dad to help with that.
Do put that blue one up, though!

OMG this is awesome!! O.O I lurve dragons, and you've made me both amazed and absolutely jealous of your skill with this pic. XD It's marvelous. I love everything about it...but the size does make it hard to review, so I can't really tell you if anything's wrong with it (which if I find something I will, because I too love to draw dragons--I just can't do it as well as you can. ^_^; ).

Beautiful work! I wanna see more.