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Fri Jul 25, 2008 7:04 am
Rascalover says...



Ok so I work in a nursery and I was playing around with my camera. I haven't posted in the arts and such forum so I hope you like it?

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Sat Jul 26, 2008 3:34 am
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cuuute! I love babies. But, of course, who doesn't?
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Sat Jul 26, 2008 4:17 am
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Thanks? ahah,
*hugz* Im glad you liked the picture it took me like five shots because I had to lay on the ground to get it....
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Sun Jul 27, 2008 5:48 am
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Awwh. That's a really cute baby. Although, I have a teeny tiny critique that probably won't even count as a review because there's really not much that I would change. But oh well.

The baby is leaning on something really strange looking, and I can't figure it out. Maybe if you took that out, the main focus would be on the baby, and that would be a whole lot better.

Good job, and cute baby.

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Sun Jul 27, 2008 7:08 pm
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Thanks, and he was in a stroller so maybe thats what you're talking about...
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Sun Jul 27, 2008 8:01 pm
Rei says...



I love babies! They're the perfect subject for photography. With this one, maybe you could play around with the angles and lighting to make it better, but other than that, it's pretty good.
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Mon Jul 28, 2008 1:28 pm
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Oooooohhhhhh cute picture. Babies are so cute ( well most of them). I agree with Big Bad Bear, the head of the baby looks a little stretched out to the side. The lighting could be a little better, but I think it's dark because of the hood of the stroller. All in all, the picture is good. The mother of the child should be happy to have a beautiful baby. :D
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Mon Jul 28, 2008 8:08 pm
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I know hes soo cute his names Kaden.
Adn thanks for the reveiws... I could of played with lightening and stuff, but I wanted a picture of him sleeping and he was about to wake up! ahah...
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Thu Jul 31, 2008 3:49 am
Via says...



It's cute, but I have a few questions/suggestions:

-where's the rest of the picture? Usually photos are rectangular instead of square. what/where is the rest of the rectangle...I suppose?

-did you possibly resize this picture? It seems a bit...squished? Try pulling it out a bit to the left or right, just to stretch it a tiny bit--but, when you do, just watch for pixelation.

-the lighting seems a bit odd as well, like not dim but not quite bright enough either. Though, that's not really something you can change at this point. I know with kids it's the first time or never again often times!

Cute, indeed!

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Thu Jul 31, 2008 10:25 pm
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- I resized the pictured because it was too big for reveiwing, and I cut out some of the left side because it wasn't needed in the picture.

-Yes I got permission from the parents. I would never post it if not.

Im glad you liked it.
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