Young Writers Society

Who's the Enemy?
There's more than two sides to one story

http://ambercoultis.deviantart.com/art/ ... y-92354854
-This is one of my inspirations for a story I haven't started. It's to be a sifi.


This was my original picture for idea of A New Light on a Distant Shot.

http://ambercoultis.deviantart.com/art/ ... a-92354467
-It's quite bad compared to the one I have now for the cover.


And this is just one of my favorite colored pictures.

http://ambercoultis.deviantart.com/art/ ... g-92354019
-It took a while to draw.

Add more later.

by your request i have come, i'm not much of a art critique but for the first two i have to say i didn't like them. for the last one i have to say that it was really good and i think if you would just take your time on every peice like you did this one then they all would look really good.

sorry i wasn't much help

---Jon---

The first two I were just doddling. Good thing I have a cover to make up for the idea for A New Light on a DIstant Shot.

The other one.. I don't know what I was doing. I was just fooling around and found an inresting idea whith it but hey. Those two suck the most.

How about this?

http://ambercoultis.deviantart.com/art/ ... y-92374801

wow i really like the first one it is so creative i love all of your work The second one is really cool I would have to say that the last one is my favorite though I like all of the colors and the ideas that you have please let me know when you post some new pictures
happy drawing

Here. My favorite one. I'm going to scan this on later.

http://ambercoultis.deviantart.com/art/ ... d-93428908

i liked them

the hair looked as if it took forever to draw
but i liked the idea

the third one, which had the most color.
really looked cool

although the second one that had the person upside down
i didnt really get that one but it was still good

the first one wasn't terrible but it i think it might look better with color
otherwise it was a pretty good drawing