Young Writers Society

You're too hard on yourself, man. If I could draw like that, I think I'd be an arrogant punk. See? I'm the lame one, for stealing lines from Burger King commercials. I don't even eat Burger King. But, uh, anyways...

I love the colors in this picture for some reason. They look all warm and cozy, like I could just hug that big bad bear forever and ever. But I wouldn't, because then I might crinkle the paper, thus ruining your drawing. That would be a tragedy, one I do not wish to be responsible for. Because then riots might ensue, and the world would fall to devastation... are you rolling your eyes yet?

ANYways! Beautiful picture!

Hello,
This is a very good drawing. I love the coloring that you used.
The thing that threw it off for me is that the body is a bit unnatural. What helps me in those situations is starting from the skeleton, and slowly layering parts of the body, therefore it has a more natural feel.

All in all, very good!