Young Writers Society

He seemed to really like it...anyways...heres the link. Don't be to harsh because I know I'm not that great.

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f133/ ... edkiss.jpg

OMG! I LOVE this picture. *huggles you*

awww thank you ^-^

Aww, how sweet. I love the color/shading of the girl's hair. I can't put my finger on it, but there's something a little off about the guy. I think he kind of looks like he's stretching up a bit in order to be taller than her so he can kiss her on a downward angle.

(( And I know how that goes. My boyfriend is a fraction of an inch shorter than I am and he hates it. Every time we take a picture he stands on the balls of his feet so he looks taller than me. ))

that's so cute and sweet.
mega awwww

Faces look a bit flat i must say especially his but hey, the pic is still great! I'd love that if it was made for me. =)

That's a lovely picture. I think the way you blend the colours down and up to form textures, very original. My only concern is the way the grass curves around the heads a little, especially on the right but this is actually brilliant for a computer drawing. If you don't already have one, I would get a graphics tablet since I bet you would enjoy drawing with it.

Best,

...this was done on the computer?
Wow, amazing job.
It looks like an oil painting! the only
problem is that the boy looks oddly
strange to me, but it's not like I could
do any better. Yer really good at this:D


I really liked the jaw lines mostly because
I have a hard time drawing out kissing
scenes. Hehe.


Though, the boys jaw line mark is a
little off-perspective with the his
chin line.

The girls hair is fantastic and the colors
are wonderful.

Goodjob! If you keep practicing with it,
you'll get even better(: