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This is actually quite old. Hopes you likes. ^_^

Hey, I remember seeing this on d-art. I though it was beautiful.

Wow, that's gorgeous.

I actually really like this--in particular the face. In my opinion the necklace is a little small but it fits in nicely. I'm not sure about the patch just under the hair--you've done some beautiful shading, why not try a little more, eh?

I'm not sure what that ring is at the back, maybe emphasise it? Overall--lovely! Post some more, I love your art.

wow. this is great.

i think that your shading and style is wonderful.

not much else to say.

Beautiful!


-GC10

That's a really good picture - fantastic shading, goo proportioning, very realistic drawing. i really like the pencil work, and you've made your image come alive - well done!

The only thing I'd comment on would be the lips and the chin - the lips are a bit... sharp, if you think about it, and the chin is a bit small. But this does not make the picture any less effective.

Fantastic!

She's hot. I think her left eye ( our right, looking at the picture ) is a bit slanty, kind of crooked, but it doesn't seem to detract from the overall piece, and I certainly couldn't do any better! I like her ponytail, and I love the shading in her eyes. Beautiful. *thumbs up*

This is beautiful. My only complaint are that her eyelashes on the bottom are really thick. But you certainly have a way with that shading, I am muchos impressed by the nose (even if the ring is kind of freaking me out). nice job!

This is gorgeous! *Thumbs way up* Your amazing at shading and the eyes are really expressive.

WOWOWOWOWOW.

I love this drawing, what espeicailly caught me was the the eyes you made, it is fantastic.

The shading is really good, and I love the clothes you made. AWESOME JOB!!!

I actually really, really like this!

The only thing I can really suggest is a bit more shading on areas other than the face (i.e. the shirt, and other clothing/articles). Also, maybe put the hair a little bit closer in the part, just seems a bit too wide to be an actual part (she's got so much hair with that wide of parts! =] ).

The face is really quite good! Only suggestion is the eyes are a bit too large for such a delicate face. But, it's not something I noticed until after I stared at it for awhile, so it's not in immediate need of changing. The lips are great (the thing I struggle most with) but don't forget the detail on the right side. The nose is also wonderful.

Good work!

Wow you are an amazing artist! I'm so jealous =] I can never quite get the hang of it myself. This picture is just so pretty. I love her expression, she looks so hardcore! If that makes any sense at all. I can't really critique this because I'm no artist myself, I guess I just wanted to say I liked it.