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Mon Jun 13, 2005 7:11 pm
Caligula's Launderette says...



A friend and I are working on a comic together, well most of it is from her imagination. I thought I'd post a few little snippits. I hope you can read it, the writings kind of blurry. has been thus deleted and revised look for the comic that was once here under comicness revised...

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Last edited by Caligula's Launderette on Thu Jun 16, 2005 7:50 am, edited 1 time in total.
Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
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Tue Jun 14, 2005 2:38 am
electricbluemonkey says...



Hmm, pretty hard to read, but I think I read ass in there somewhere so that guarantees that its awesome...

But seriously, that was a brilliant...brilliant work of art. Pure humor. Although I do suggest going over the lettering in ink.
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Wed Jun 15, 2005 11:53 pm
Bobo says...



Yes, hard to read. I like the thing about "The Man" and "The Legend" Haha.
  





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Fri Jun 17, 2005 8:17 pm
Harley says...



i thought it was easy to read

amazing drawings and funny, too. great job!
  





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Fri Jun 17, 2005 10:45 pm
Shriek says...



Hehe, love it. The facial expressions are great.
I didn't have any trouble reading the handwriting at all.
i thought you were shallow, but then i fell in deep.
  





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Fri Jan 27, 2006 4:42 am
Dargquon Ql'deleodna says...



haha, this rocks, you need to post more of this, stuff its cool, i like it and other people seem to aswell, i can read it perfectly.
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Fri Jan 27, 2006 8:55 am
Griffinkeeper says...



Do you think you can resize this a little? It's pretty big.
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Fri Jan 27, 2006 9:01 am
Snoink says...



You should color this. Now. :)
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Fri Jan 27, 2006 10:06 am
Snip Snip says...



The art is good, but you need to ink and color it, AND work on your spelling. :P
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Fri Jan 27, 2006 6:46 pm
Sponson Light says...



The handwritings' fine.

Cut all the extra white crap off the picture, it only takes up room, and Itll be smaller, then thumbnail it if you think it's too large.

I liked the "6:00 am at night".
However the art makes it difficult to see if they're actually talking or not.

Like the guy-in-the-middle's mouth, I cant tell what shape it is.
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Fri Jan 27, 2006 10:03 pm
Dargquon Ql'deleodna says...



i think the guy in the middle is actually a girl.....
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Sat Jan 28, 2006 12:00 am
Sponson Light says...



Really?
I couldn't tell for sure.
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Sat Jan 28, 2006 12:04 am
Dargquon Ql'deleodna says...



i couldn't either but i used the words to help me, he said "alright ladies" so saying there were more than one, and there were only 2 other ppl there i inferred that they were both women.
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Sat Jan 28, 2006 12:07 am
Sponson Light says...



Yeah, but people use "step aside ladies" as an insult. Demoting "strong" men into "weak" women.
Thats the meaning, Im not saying I support it.

Also the shirt says "the man and the legend".
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Sat Jan 28, 2006 12:10 am
Dargquon Ql'deleodna says...



true true, i see your points, i guess we'll just have to wait for the creator to answer our question.
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