The artwork is really great I love the chi-bi anime style. And unless you edited the words since all of the complaints I can read the perfectly because my hand writing is of the equivalent of a five-year-olds.
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In regards to the artwork: they ALL look like girls, even the first one, i thought he was a girl until i noticed his shirt was open. What is with all of their hair? It all looks girly.
in regards to the humor: I get the joke but it is not funny. And that one girl/boy-person's shirt with the "the man the legend" does not really fit. I know you did not make that up. You saw it somwhere and thought it was funny and decided to throw it on. It is out of context. Mostly fat older men wear those.
Basically I did not like it at all.
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uh... yeah, well some people had a lot to say about this little piece of nonsense. That was from ages ago, basically from yeah... ages ago = crap, or at least compared to now, over analyzing just a tad there guys...
To explain, the guy in the middle Mike is a crossdresser, not my fault...
As for the ladies comment, Ry, the character who says that, well he calls them ladies all the time.
But wow, yeah..., thanks for all the comments on this little doodle.
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