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Lollipops make you smile



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Mon Jun 30, 2008 7:52 pm
blacktiger3915 says...



This is actually poems I created in 10th grade. I couldn't put this in the other poem section for some reason. But, I hope y'all like it!
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Don't send sheep to kill a wolf.
  





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Tue Jul 01, 2008 2:20 pm
niccy_v says...



That... is amazing! Pretty original thinking my friend. So cute. Now it just needs a better background. Come on, you can do better than white!
I might make one of these myself in my frequent times of homework-related-break-downs resulting in utter boredom. Good idea.
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Tue Jul 01, 2008 7:26 pm
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Thanks, I was afraid of putting a backgroud to it because I thought it would clash with the other colors.
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Wed Jul 02, 2008 7:10 pm
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I'm going to try to make another one, but I don't know what the subject should be. Any suggestions?
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Wed Jul 02, 2008 10:50 pm
Jon says...



i liked these two but i liked the lolly pop better that the smiley face, i think that there should have been more to the lolly pop. good work!
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Thu Jul 03, 2008 2:18 pm
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Thanks. I do like the lollipop better also.
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