Young Writers Society

I
LOVE
HEROES

I'm having fun with this. I should be outside at the summer fair but I'm ill. And keeping my friend Sam company because she's doing her science (which she should have already done.)

Okay, so this isn't an icon. But it's cool. The fist ever MATTY PATTY!!!!!!!

Hehe I think this should be rated R.

That aside, nice lil' pics! I understand these weren't meant to be too serious, but I am...

1) I think it is hard to see you face fully, try cropping some from the right, or maybe putting the test in there to fill the gap. There is a lot of wasted space

2) As an icon, the writing would be hard to read, which it already is. I would make the font bigger, and well... get a font! I think a scribbly font would look nice, and the impact would work better. When I first saw this, I thought bee was just a scribble and the "I'm going in" was... let's say not that . I would try to make it clearer, or maybe even put a cartoon bee in.

3) Umm... ye! Well, far from professional, but hey! Should you want to make it professional, just try finding various clips of him, and jumbling them about. Make sure you only have the bread though, otherwise it will look cheap.

Nice icons once again!

*Gives a cookie* I think we need to teach you about Photobucket.

Anyway onto the review of your pictures.

1. I like this one lot. Being an obscene fan of Heroes too, I giggled a lot.

2. Err....not so much. The bee looks weird cause it's all paint yellow and badly mouse drawn. And the letters are bad, very very bad. They distract cause they're so random and odd. And I think the picture of Parkman could be clearer and not so fuzzy. I think that is a shot oif him using his powers, but for the purpose of an icon it should be a clean picture.

3. It's strange...simply strange and odd and a little creepy to be honest. Funny though, and strange. I'll never see him the same again!

All in all these are pretty cool and a nice effort on your part. But yeah, I'll send a PM on how you can use Photobucket and save you from having to make multiple posts for multiple pics.

Additionally: Thread titles in all caps are annoying. I changed it. ^-^