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Tue Jun 10, 2008 11:07 pm
Firestar says...



Hope you enjoy!!! :smt020
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Wed Jun 11, 2008 3:46 pm
Logic says...



Hi Firestar!

This is a really nice picture--I love the colours here. However, I do think there is little to see, there's no main focal point. There definitely should be a brighter spot, or the sun should be visible through the clouds. Here, There is nothing to drag my attention, and the angle makes it seem that you are simply looking up, as opposed to from a landscape.

Nice picture!
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Sat Jun 14, 2008 7:59 pm
JezzaP says...



Hey,

Ye, I agree with Logic on this one. Nice looking picture, but for me there is no focus point, and so my yes just drift over it.

The angle is very direct, there is little landscape and the clouds don't shed much attention to me at all, it's like I should be seeing something that isn't there.

Not much more to say, but well done.
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Fri Jun 27, 2008 8:42 pm
Scorpia says...



More like a colorful blob, lol ;) I think it needs tio be smaller, it's kind of annoying to have to move both the...moving...thingies, lol.
Pretty color though.

Listen to the other comments, you can have a great pic. Would of liked to see the sun, it is a SUNset, lol. It's kind of blurry, but not in a bad way. I like it, you could use it as a background or something!
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