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Mon Jun 09, 2008 4:41 pm
Night Mistress says...



I found this in our photo file. ain't that neat?
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Mon Jun 09, 2008 5:30 pm
blacktiger3915 says...



Wow that's pretty. I remember around February, there was a lunar eclipse outside my house. Everybody as outside looking at it and taking pictures. The news said that the next time we will see another one is in 2011. I will be 21! I want to see a solar eclipse.
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Tue Jun 10, 2008 3:21 am
Alteran says...



It's a pretty cool pic. I love eclipses.

Just a thought though, maybe try resizing the picture and cropping some of the black. Other than that it has a cool effect.
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Tue Jun 10, 2008 3:24 pm
lit-chick-4evva says...



Whoa, that picture is amazing!

However, there are a few things i'd do.

Resize it, and perhaps crop out some of the black.

Other than that, the moon part is absolutely amazing and breathtaking. :)
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Thu Jun 12, 2008 3:14 pm
writ3rindisguis3 says...



I love this picture! Eclipses are so pretty and amazing. I've seen a lunar eclipse and thought it was awesome. Try cutting out some of the black. I absolutely love the moon in full view. Wow...^_^
  





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Thu Jun 12, 2008 4:49 pm
Logic says...



Wow, that is lovely!

But ye, I would suggest cropping down a lot of the black, so it is more focused and I can see the image better :P I'm loving the glow you have going on there, and I must ask: when/where did you take this?

I just noticed the dark grey ball beneath it, very classy! If you want to keep the natural effect, never mind about this, but otherwise you can maybe lighten/contrast some more?

That said, very nice. :-)
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Thu Jun 12, 2008 11:06 pm
Firearris says...



Ooooh, I remember when that happened! Speaking of that, I need to post my pictures! XP I say, resize it, crop out some of that black, and your good to go! Its a really nice picture, and its really cool/pretty/neat/all of the above. ;)

I love it!

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Sat Jun 28, 2008 3:23 pm
Veracelle says...



Whoa. that is beautiful! I love the contrast from one side of the moon to the other... PS: try not to make your pictures so big! the moon was kind of hard to find...
  





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Tue Jul 01, 2008 8:46 pm
Rascalover says...



Thats an awesome picture, but I think it would be best if you cut some of the black out since the main focal point is so small. Just a thought, but other wise I really like this picture.
  





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Tue Jul 01, 2008 9:30 pm
Teh_Huntress says...



Wow, really pretty! This is a great picture, the Lunar Eclipse is cool. :) The picture it huge though. Like some of the others said, maybe crop the black, so its much smaller. :D

This is really, really, awesome, I wish I could have got pictures of it in my area. :( Anyways, greatness!
  








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