I'd rather write about this world than live in itand I'd rather play music all day and read and wander around bookstoresand watch humansbut not be one of them.
hey i love the whole natural affect i mean the grass it looks very greenish and that complements alot can u plez review my story its summer 08 thanks =]
If I were you, I'd try to downsize them a little. Right now, they're a bit too big to appreciate. Try opening them in paint if you've got Microsoft Windows. Go to Image > Sketch and Skew and resize it to about 50% in all directions, then save.
It also looks like these need to be rotated - so right click on them when they're in whatever folder they're saved in, and see if there's an option to open it in Microsoft Photo Editor and rotate them so they're the right way up. If not, sometimes OSs like Windows XP have a built-in feature where they let you rotate pictures with a menu in Windows Explorer. Pretty cool, yeah?
Anyway, can't wait to see them when they fit on my screen!
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They are stretching out the whole forum thing and I really can't get a good feel for them because they're too big to just look at.
Also, you shouldn't do photos vertically when you paste them here. Just do them regularly because that adds to the complication of critting this art work.
I do like that they aren't the same girl every time. But you should do a few more pictures.
Let me now when you do that and then I'll crit them! 0(o.o)0
I will review for you! PM about it if you need one!
I agree with the above comments. But this is what I felt about them anyway:
1st: It's out of focus. Good composition, nice backdrop, but the blurriness of your face really looses any impact it may have had. I would try it with your face in focus, and it would be so much better.
2nd: This one is nice. Soft lighting, happy smiles, very candid but cute. Again, try focusing it a bit more, and try to control the light more at the top (different angle, perhaps).
3rd: I loved the colour of the grass, and all the colours in this. Very natural, very peaceful. I think you should lower the aperture a little, if you're using a camera that allows you to do so. It's a bit too bright for my liking, and that should help.
Oh wow these are big. Like really, wow!
I love the natural feel to these. Really, it makes me smile! It has the whole "Remember when" feel to it! Gosh now I really feel like going and looking up all my old jr high girlfriends and taking silly pictures.
Anywho, way to go the natural way and say "Booyah, this is me!"
~ Eden
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The pictures are really big so they stretch the screen. They were also on their side, which made it hard to see them. All the photo's seemed really out of focus.
I couldn't really see them very well because of the size, so I can't say a whole lot, but I'd lke to see them if you made them a bit smaller.
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