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Sun May 11, 2008 1:54 pm
Eva 040 says...



These are what happens when your grounded for a week with a camera phone and macromedia fireworks =]

Walk The Line

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(Inspiration fromthe poster for the Johnny Cash film, walk the line =])

I Walk Alone

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MSN

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Thats all for now, i may make some more =]
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Mon May 12, 2008 10:55 pm
Dr. Jamie Bondage says...



I really like the last one, but the first two are so similar. They don't seem...different enough. Lol. I loved the last one though! It was awesome! Keep up the good work!

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Tue May 13, 2008 9:51 pm
Rydia says...



1. I love the colour and atmosphere of this photo. The focus on the guitar is good and the lighting is beautiful. I wouldn't suggest changing anything.

2. The contrast of the guitar against the black and white background is effective but I think you should have cut around the person more carefully -- I'm assuming that you've cut him out and pasted him on top of this second photo?-- because he's missing quite a bit of his head and there's some white around his body. It's a good photo though and there's a nice use of space.

3. This one really doesn't catch my attention. It isn't focused enough and there's nothing interesting about the background.
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