Young Writers Society

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My great work on tilting the lense^-^

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My drawing of I have no idea actully...

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My lovely bundles of papers.

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Pretty picture!

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Very bad picture of my sketch of my room.

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A pic of a drawing

Heya!

1) It's hard to see and vry blurry. I find this picture very dull, and I find the content a little boring.

2)Again very small, but I like this one a lot. I reckon a little more focus on the leaf wouldn't do any harm though.

3) Nice angle, but why are they all so small?! Anyhow nice picture, but again, a little boring. This isn't as interesting, but nice as pictures of papers go

4) This is more of a drawing than a photograph. The idea of photography is to see something only the camera can, or hold a great angle of something. This is more of a picture of a box, doesn't even get the whole picture in. Nice drawing, by the way

5) You're right, I can't see anything. I am not a fan of drawing on lined paper, but I'll see when you get it up.

6) Very cute, I like it. Quite blurry though, trying scanning!

Nice pics, sorry if I was a little harsh, but I didn't realy find some of these... photographic, rather just pictures of stuff, with the odd exception.

-Mark

Ya I kinda sent them to my email from my phone so I can't really help any of that...

I will bother my mom eventually to help me with the evil scanner.

i really like the second one i think that if you hadn't told us that you took that with your phone i would have never guessed it

the fourth one is cool too did you draw that? it's good

those are my two favorite ones

happy picture taking (idk)

No. But I wanted to make somehting like it. It's the only picture I have of that one or I'd get a much better one. I'm surprised you found this. I personally don't really like this one.

I'm sorry, there's something disagreeable about this work. First, the photos are unusually small (Lol, I know the reasoning behind that), the noise is too loud in them (the fuzz), and the angles aren't that great. In the one of the drawing, you can see your shadow as you held the phone. you want to try to avoid that as much as possible. Also, in the future, could you put your work directly in the post? Like since you use photobucket, copy and paste the IMG link instead of direct link . Just keep practicing, you have good potential. It just needs work.

Good luck!
June