Young Writers Society

Eh, I find these quite boring.
I've never been fond of anim drawing or whatever it is.
The text in the first ones are hard to read, and the rest seem very plain.
I guess these are just like sketches right?
A lot of the people look very out of shape to me. Like their heads are two big or two long.
But some of your ideas look interesting.
keep working on it

Agreed that the text in your signatures is hard to read. However, your grasp of manga is quite good in reference to your sketches. They merely need a few touch ups--stronger lines for the line work to be specific. As is, they look like exactly what they are--sketches. With touch-ups, they can be turned into finished works.

--King