It is a very nice idea, to represent something so. You did a great job. Very creative, entertaining and fun! Well done! There is little else to say, although my only advice would be to increase the framerate, it is a little slow.
Oooo. 0.0 *is hypnotized* Quite delightful, darling, though I personally might prefer a higher speed.
"In a sort of ghastly simplicity we remove the organ and demand the function...We laugh at honour and are shocked to find traitors in our midst. We castrate and bid the geldings be fruitful." ~C.S. Lewis
I'm working on some more atm. And yeh, I agree, the framerate is too slow. I was having trouble with uploading it - it was always a little slower than I originally made it in Fireworks...so working on that.
it really hurts my eyes. But that can be a good thing, I think.
It doesn't really keep my attention. I guess it aint my thing.
I don't really understand it..
I think the transaction between frames/ slides could be smoother - maybe if you include more if you know what I mean - but this is really cool. I love the vibrant colours, the patterns work very well and how the writing fizzles out is lovely. I'm not sure about your choice of wording, however. That could be something more interesting or meaningful.
The border is nice but I think it might work better as a strong, black line at the very edge of each frame? Maybe experiment a little? But generally, it works really well.
There’s always a story. It’s all stories, really. The sun coming up every day is a story. Everything’s got a story in it. Change the story, change the world. — Terry Pratchett
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