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Fri Apr 11, 2008 5:28 am
ink_on_fire says...



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This is one of my best friends, lol.

Beautiful sound...
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Fri Apr 11, 2008 3:05 pm
Azila says...



You're best friend, you say? :P

Anyway, the picture is a bit blurry and the colors aren't vibrant enough. Maybe try making it darker and higher contrast? Also, I would like to see the whole guitar.

Work on the clarity a bit. Right now it kinda looks like a cell-phone picture. :oops:

Hope this helps somewhat!
~Azila~
  





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Fri Apr 11, 2008 6:16 pm
Mortality says...



I agree, the background just doesn't
go well with the guitar and the
negative just doesn't fit well with this picture.
and it just looks akward
You could much better :p
  





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Fri Apr 11, 2008 11:02 pm
Lil Dono says...



I think the idea is there but it isn't portrayed very well.

I would go with a vertical shot of the guitar, darker background, and maybe a sepia tone.

Keep workin' on it :D
  





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Sat Apr 12, 2008 2:14 am
ink_on_fire says...



Thanks guys :)

I will work on it :)
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