Young Writers Society

Something I drew in class the other day cause I finished everything else. the two questions I kept getting were, "What is it?" and, "Where's it's mouth?" I'm pretty sure the mouth is there. XD

Oh, and in case you were wondering, the censored patch is where my signature is.

So, yeah. thoughts, critiques? Please??

Awww! It's so cute, Sachiko-chan!!

Good job...I wish I could draw... XP

~Tiiiiiiimeeeeea

Wow. That's really cute!

-Jared

Sachiko-Chan, it's soooo adorable!!

I see the mouth...but it looks like it's frowning to me. Frowning is no fun!

I do wanna know what it is though...

Good job!

~Bella~

P.S. Thanks for making me lose the game. niice

Nice! it's face is really cute and I love those ears!

I also like the shape of the body, but the arms seem a little off. They're just kind of flat... and look more like they'd be flaps of skin than anything else. If you made them on the side of the body, and made them bump out, that might help. It also might help if you put some more shading on them, to make them look rounder.

The tail is cute too, but I feel like the feet could be a little flatter... they look almost like dinner rolls or something. XD

I can see the mouth--such an adorable expression! ^_^
~Azila~

Wow I really love that!

~Mark

I just wanna squeeze it. :3

Aw, thanks everybody. ^_^Azila-chan, thanks muchlies! I'll try to incorporate some of your suggestions, but I colored it this morning without checking my responses... -.- I'll see what I can do about the arms. ^_^ Thanks!

Aw pretty I like how it's curved and not very cutting....
-em

Ohmygeezers!
Its so cute!
Makes me wanna cuddle it!
This is very cool and you did a awesome job drawing it.
Please draw some more fantastic drawings!
Your amazing

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! Its so cute! Great job, Cat! You should do more like this.

Black Cat Sachiko wrote:Aw, thanks everybody. ^_^Azila-chan, thanks muchlies! I'll try to incorporate some of your suggestions, but I colored it this morning without checking my responses... -.- I'll see what I can do about the arms. ^_^ Thanks!

Oh, to start, I have a suggestion. If you have a photo-copier, then photo-copy it, and color the copied version. Anyways, I think its really cute! I think you should try drawing more,and posting, its very cute.

Can I have one, Mum? PLeeeeeeeeeeeeez? I'll feed it and take care of it!

*snuggles*

It's so cute I could eat it. Srsly. I loves it.

-Saint Razorblade
The Official YWS Pirate

*giggles* thanks, Razor-chan! ^_^ One of these days (tonight, hopefully) I'll post the colored version. ^_^

Aww!! So kawaii! I love the shading! I only wish I could draw this good! Awesome job Cat!! Oh, I can't wait for the colored version by the way!!

~Lulu