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It doesn't really have a name, but it will do. Anyways, here it is! It's not great, but this is a product of boredom. I don't like the bridge and the horixzon is a bit iffy. Also, that path on the left isn't meant to be there

This is really good. It has good shading on it and the bridge is really well drawn. I like it

What path? Oh that path.

Meh, it looks ok there, keep it.

this is quite nice.
good work

~Blue Fairy

Thanks!

The shading is good. The drake looks very 3D.

However, I feel like it's a bit too smooth... some scales might be nice? Also, the tail looks a tad too short and it doesn't really have any back legs. Also, the shape of the face is a little strange and I think the proportions of the body vs the head/neck seems a tad wonky.

I like the bridge and the road, though! The horizon is a bit strange... maybe make there be something poking up behind--like distant mountains/hills and valleys?

I hope this helps...

~Azila~

Does the dragon have legs?....Just wondering.
-em

It has no back legs! D:

I like the shading, this is wonderful. MY only real complaint is the lack of anatomy towards the tal, and perhaps a bit more foreshadow? Make the dragon look like it's really coming towards us, and make the background look farther away, because right now it's sort of stealing the attention away from the dragon.

Other than that, it's great!

I love the obvious effort you put into it, even if it was just a doodle, and the shadings and pencil smudging give it some wicked cool shadows. Congrats!

Hehe thank you everyone!

I will improve it!

~Mark

This is great! Keep it up, and I can't wait to see more of your work!

I really like your drawing, the dragon is, in a way, adorable !
The bridge is well done, I like it, and the river too.
The only thing i like less is the fact that beyond the bridge the world kind of... stops?
Maybe mountains in the background, or the river dissapearing into the distance through hills, or anything. That would make it even nicer!
It's an impressively good "product of boredom" When i'm bored and i draw it's usually extremely bad
Oh well

Keep drawing! And from what I've seen, also keep writing!

Xxx Do

very...interesting.
Look sort of like an undetailed wyvern

Thanks everyone for the feedback. That river is meant to be a waterfall, but not a good one

I like the picture a lot. It does look 3-D and I ready for it to move for some reason. Keep drawing!

very nice!

Wow. You should produce some more pictures like this.
Your shading is accurate, and something with good tone from memory, or imagination, in my opinion, shows great creativity.
Y'see, with the tail, you've made it curve round enough but it's got this...oddness about it.
There's this technique similar to the one you've used, though more efficient.
I post some of my [art]work on soon, and you may see what mean.
The anatomy could do with a bit of adjusting. but the way you have positioned the dragon, it gives it a look of pride and independency.
- Good perspective
Cool.

Your work shows that ANYONE can produce art - it doesn't have to be mega detailed. I mean, a blot on a canvas can be called "art"
You've got talent, and you should definitely hone it by practising.

It's cute ^.^ nice toning.
Some research into anatomy would benefit you though (could even just use google)