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Sun Mar 30, 2008 10:48 pm
jessiieeboo says...



I edited this photo a little. Leave some feedback?
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Sun Mar 30, 2008 11:58 pm
GryphonFledgling says...



Very cute picture. She just looks so happy, drinking that soda. And I love how there's three main colors. It just draws the whole thing together.The best thing about it is the expression on her face. :D

Yeah, I'm not a photographer or a critic. :P But I liked it!

Very nice job. *thumbs up*

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Mon Mar 31, 2008 12:02 am
JabberHut says...



I never comment on this forum, but I had to say I loved this. It makes me smile every time I see it. ^_^ And the colors are amazing. It just enhances the mood.

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Mon Mar 31, 2008 4:36 am
Sohini says...



Great shot. nice expression and the lighting is awesome!

The editted stars do injustice to the photo though and... I adore that bangle.
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Mon Mar 31, 2008 10:39 am
Blue Fairy says...



The colours looked great and bring the whole picture together.

I like the little stars :D

I love that bracelet!
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Mon Mar 31, 2008 2:52 pm
Rydia says...



I think this is pretty good. The colouring is lovely and the little stars are really cute. I think the expression is rather strange but then, that makes for an interesting photo.

My main suggestion would be to black out the background a little, only I find that my eyes are drawn towards the guy in yellow rather than the foreground of the photo. The three stars above his head and the contrast of the black around him add to that so maybe just dim him a little or lighten up the black a bit?

And I think you need something in the white patch at the other side like a couple of stars or just something to break the glare of it.

It's good though. It annoys me a little that her head is partially cut off and there's someone else's arm? at the side of the photo but the effects are cool.
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Mon Mar 31, 2008 3:01 pm
Azila says...



This is really neat. I like the festivity and the colors are very cool.

I do agree with kitty15, though, that you should darken the background a tad. And also, you should have gotten her whole hair in the frame. The elbow poking in at the side actually doean't bother me, as it gives a crowded feeling, but the other things I mentioned do.

Overall, I like it! *gives you a gold star*

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Wed Apr 16, 2008 4:28 pm
ArtisanofGuild says...



really cool. im not big on photography though. take some pics of you...you have the look. lol
  





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Wed Apr 16, 2008 4:50 pm
Muse says...



This is cool. Its quirky, and really captures the moment. I like it :D
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Wed Apr 16, 2008 5:07 pm
blacktiger3915 says...



ooooooooh I love that picture. Who is it? She's pretty.
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