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Pierre



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Sun Mar 23, 2008 2:52 am
day tripper says...



This is a character I drew(:
I'll most deff. upload a better picture
when I finally charge my camera!
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A little less inhuman.
A little more brutal.
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Sun Mar 23, 2008 3:32 am
Firestar says...



I like the upper half of his face. But the bottom half is wrong somehow.
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Sun Mar 23, 2008 3:38 am
Riedawriter23 says...



Yeah I agree, I think the lips could have been drawn better. It needs a little more shading under his chin too. Good work though. :)

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Sun Mar 23, 2008 6:02 am
Loose says...



The lips and the bottom of the nose could do with a bit of sprucing up, but other than that, Pierre seems very sexy for a drawing.
  





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Tue Mar 25, 2008 8:31 pm
Blue Fairy says...



I love his hair!

What colour is it?
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Tue Mar 25, 2008 8:33 pm
day tripper says...



Black(:
Ebony whatever you want to call it.
If you go into romance fiction and click
"Oi Pierre"
and read that, it will show you the description I fallowed.
A little less inhuman.
A little more brutal.
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Fri Oct 10, 2008 8:06 pm
lshryock2 says...



i like the hair.
but the eyes are a little unuasal
good job :)
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Fri Oct 10, 2008 8:53 pm
xGraceex says...



I really like this, but i think what you have done wrong is youve made the bottom half of the face look to feminine, and the lips too thin and outlines way too much. the best way to do that is to make the jaw much bigger and stronger and only slightly shade in the lips.
the eyes are awesome, smouldering :D and his hair is great, love it
hope i helped!
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