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Sun Mar 23, 2008 1:41 am
LunaBuna43 says...



First attempt!! Please help!!
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Sun Mar 23, 2008 1:26 pm
mizz-iceberg says...



um to be honest, this is nothing too great. I mean it's not badly drawn or anything. But I can see you have a steady hand so keep practicing.
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Sun Mar 23, 2008 1:30 pm
Kadie says...



It's pretty cute, though the quality of the scan is bad.

Also, when drawing try not to draw on lined paper unless it's just a little doodle or something, which i don't think this is since you're saying it's a first attempt.

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Tue Mar 25, 2008 8:05 pm
Sercous02 says...



It is cute. It's pretty good for a few attempted. Just keep practicing and you'll get it adventually. Also, the background--even if it isn't much--is pretty good. >> I suck at backgrounds myself XD lol.
  





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Wed Mar 26, 2008 12:56 am
Kix39 says...



Its OK keep going at it. Maybe either less detail or more detail. Not both though. I can't decide if it looks to cartoony or to real. Make it one or the other.


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Wed Mar 26, 2008 2:30 pm
Aedomir says...



I like it. Not great, but a nice cartoon. You should have a go at doing some more also.
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Wed Mar 26, 2008 8:23 pm
blacktiger3915 says...



It's better than what I could have done, but your drawing needs some work if you want to pursue it. Anyway, keep working at it! :D
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Wed Mar 26, 2008 8:30 pm
Griffinkeeper says...



The computer is very small and the room is sparsely equipped. The person isn't all that bad (although I always get a little disoriented with cat people; they give me the creeps.)

The room lacks a lot of depth though, so it looks... flat. If you draw it inside a cube, then maybe it will make it easier to deal with.
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Wed Mar 26, 2008 8:58 pm
Autumn says...



hehe cute =D

I like the cat person, although the mouth looks kinda wierd for some reason o.o the eyes are good though
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Thu Mar 27, 2008 7:37 pm
starlight88 says...



It reminds me of a friend I had. She drew tons of pix like these. I like this becuase it brings back memories.
  





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Thu Mar 27, 2008 8:28 pm
Firearris says...



There is nothing special in my mind, but its really good. The scanning didn't turn out that good though. :D


Good job,

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