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Mon Feb 25, 2008 6:19 pm
busboys and poets says...



The size is a little awkward, yes, but it's my first try. Have mercy.

I kid, I kid--tear it apart, please. Let me know what I can improve upon! I'm a GIMP newbie.

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Mon Feb 25, 2008 6:22 pm
Aedomir says...



I really like it, but aren't the flowers a bit irrelavant to YWS? I like it, I think it is great, but still... way better than I could do! :lol:

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Mon Feb 25, 2008 6:24 pm
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Thanks! The idea behind the dandelion was that you blow dandelion seeds to make a wish--therefore the seeds are a symbol for wishes/imagination, and they're blowing across the page. Lol. I guess I need to not think so deep into these things. But thank you, D'Aedomir!
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Mon Feb 25, 2008 6:29 pm
Via says...



I really like it! I love the broken words, actually! And the black and white-ness. The page is a bit of a stretch though, I do think. Could you maybe have words or scribbles spaning from the dandelion seeds as they cross the page?

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Mon Feb 25, 2008 6:38 pm
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Thank you, Via! And not at all--that's what it's there for.
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Mon Feb 25, 2008 7:00 pm
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Wow that's a clever idea! I reckon you should put in small writing at the bottom, something like 'imagine what you could do' corny but still! lol, great!
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Tue Feb 26, 2008 12:02 am
Teague says...



I like it. I think it's very symbolic, with the dandelion seeds and all. ;)

You should work on it, like Via said, and PM Nate about it! He'll put it up in the Downloads section. =D

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Sun Mar 02, 2008 6:28 am
Lucky_Author says...



I really do like it. Very cool, and if you were to make flyers or something, it could boost YWS 's rep maybe.

I think the dandilion is somewhat, radom. Maybe try something to do with writing, or a younger generation, and don't be afraid to go crazy with something like this.

One other odd thing that was kinda annoying to my eye was the background. The one side crinkled and the other just straight black, at least to me, it seemed strange, and off balence. That can get trickey for the human eye, and gives it an uneven look.

I love the font, and the size of the picture.
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Fri Apr 04, 2008 5:30 pm
Mortality says...



I think it looks cool.
Although the flower doesn't have anything to do with YWS.
I like the text that Young Writers Society is in.
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Fri Apr 04, 2008 5:45 pm
Azila says...



I like the dandelion. It symbolizes life, the new generation, wishes, etc. It's perfect!

Have you PMed Nate about putting it in the Downloads section? You should. ^_~

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Fri Apr 04, 2008 8:15 pm
Archstormangel says...



It looks awesome. Great job, I'd love to know how you got that! I'm guessing maybe you could put some really cursive, messy, faded writing in some way on the paper? And make sure it folds in the same way the paper does, I dunno. That would be awesome, add some more life to what the YWS is about?

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I really liked this thing. The stuff blowing in the wind was cool and I liked the background parts. Overall, good job.
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Sat Apr 05, 2008 5:40 am
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It's cool. I like it.

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Sat Apr 05, 2008 2:32 pm
Runawaythoughts says...



Well i dont get the flower, thing, even with the wish, and im not sure how many other people would get it. I love it though, its great good job.
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Tue Apr 08, 2008 8:43 pm
Ash says...



Wow, I love it! It looks so cool. :)
  








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