Thanks! The idea behind the dandelion was that you blow dandelion seeds to make a wish--therefore the seeds are a symbol for wishes/imagination, and they're blowing across the page. Lol. I guess I need to not think so deep into these things. But thank you, D'Aedomir!
I really like it! I love the broken words, actually! And the black and white-ness. The page is a bit of a stretch though, I do think. Could you maybe have words or scribbles spaning from the dandelion seeds as they cross the page?
Wow that's a clever idea! I reckon you should put in small writing at the bottom, something like 'imagine what you could do' corny but still! lol, great!
I like it. I think it's very symbolic, with the dandelion seeds and all.
You should work on it, like Via said, and PM Nate about it! He'll put it up in the Downloads section. =D
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I really do like it. Very cool, and if you were to make flyers or something, it could boost YWS 's rep maybe.
I think the dandilion is somewhat, radom. Maybe try something to do with writing, or a younger generation, and don't be afraid to go crazy with something like this.
One other odd thing that was kinda annoying to my eye was the background. The one side crinkled and the other just straight black, at least to me, it seemed strange, and off balence. That can get trickey for the human eye, and gives it an uneven look.
I love the font, and the size of the picture.
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It looks awesome. Great job, I'd love to know how you got that! I'm guessing maybe you could put some really cursive, messy, faded writing in some way on the paper? And make sure it folds in the same way the paper does, I dunno. That would be awesome, add some more life to what the YWS is about?
Great, it's fabulous. I love it.
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