Young Writers Society

I really love how this one turned out, mainly because of the wings. This was also for my British Lit. project. I read the poem...um.."Childe Harold Pilgrammage"...or somethng like that, by Lord Byron. This is what I had come up with.



I love the wings!!!

...and the lower legs didn't come in very well when I had scanned the picture in...

--meow

I think her arm's a little long but the details good and the wings are beautiful. I think the hair seems a little thin so maybe add a few more strands? But generally, it's really well drawn and I'd love to see it coloured.

Very pretty, but does her butt have to be the first thing I notice? And maybe you should add in her left arm. If she has one, then I can't see it.

I think it's a good starter, like the others. But there isn't really a lot to crit on? The wings are out there, and I like the idea, but they are connected at all. The butt is a little bit....pointy? arrowy? I'm not really sure what I mean haha. She has no feet and only one arm.

Maybe finish the picture a little more before it can really be reviewed.

I think that this is very well done, but you are right about how the scanner sort of just felt like skrewing with the legs a bit. And I think that you missed the left hand or something. (The butt is not pointy people! Lol.) But, other than those two things, it's great.

Your Fellow Artiste',
~Monki

Okay, this bothering, the left arm is there people!! It's just in front of her, so you can't see it XD

just had to say that XD

--meow

I love the wings! They're so whimsical. Great job on those. ^_^
I have to say though, the but looks...I dunno, small and round yet pinched?
I agree that the hair should be more voluminous. Add more strands.
Overall, good work!

It is nice.The touch of the pink gives it a very nice touch.-Jeni

very well drawn I am envious of your ability to draw humans. Unfortunately it seems like your girl is going bald and her left arm is lost.
I must admit I love the wings too...they were the best part

I love her wings! ^_^ Nice pose too... and umm... butt. lol Everyone's already touched the "arm" problem, but I have my own opinion about something that could be improved. I think that you should fill in her hair a bit more; it looks like she's been pulling it out or something. I'm not saying she needs to have some long Rupunzel (lol spelling?) type of hair, but maybe just a LITTLE bit thicker. Not longer. Thicker.

Great work!

~*Syd*~

it's way good. especially the wings. but her hair could be a little thicker.