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Fri Apr 08, 2005 3:49 pm
Muse says...



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This is a character from one of my stories. She's a bit messy around the edges but im still half working on her. :)
Last edited by Muse on Sat Apr 09, 2005 1:59 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Fri Apr 08, 2005 8:44 pm
Areida says...



Ooh...she's good!! I can't draw worth a flip, but I still know that this is great. :D
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Fri Apr 08, 2005 9:38 pm
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i like it too!

whats the character called? whats she like?
  





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Fri Apr 08, 2005 11:01 pm
Crysi says...



Ooh, that's great! I really like her expression, and her eyes are beautiful! Well-done!
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Sat Apr 09, 2005 12:41 pm
Zion says...



woah! She so cool! You really have the talent for it. A little spit-n-shine and she'll be even more amazing! ;)
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Sat Apr 09, 2005 12:43 pm
Firestarter says...



That's really good! But what is she leaning on??

Love the eyes.
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Sat Apr 09, 2005 1:51 pm
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She's leaning on an...invisible wall?? I didn't know how i was going to do the background, so i left it for just now. hmm..
"Sometimes we see a cloud that's dragonish,
A vapour sometimes like a bear or lion,
A towered citadel, a pendant rock,
A forked mountain, or blue promontory,
With trees upon't that nod unto the world,And mock our eyes with air.."
  





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Mon Apr 11, 2005 9:49 am
Emma says...



Wow that is soooo good. Though the only problem is that (omg I am so mean, and bad at spelling, its the M&Ms Im eating in the morning, its getting to my head)

I aint sure the legs part bit, something isnt right. Though it could be just me. Good! And you have to teach me to draw lips! >.<
  





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Thu Dec 15, 2005 1:37 am
Dargquon Ql'deleodna says...



the necromancer strikes again. this is a good peice of work, realistic, and its a girl, and i cant draw girls worth a flip, so just about any drawing amazes me, when will this peice of work be finished, as you said "its only half done"
keep working on it
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Thu Dec 15, 2005 1:52 am
The Silent Aviator says...



Muse wrote:
She's a bit messy around the edges but im still half working on her. :)


C'mon, Muse. "rough around the ages"? This work of art is amazing and kicks ass. I could never do that good. (yes, DQ, you heard me).
  





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Thu Dec 15, 2005 1:56 am
Dargquon Ql'deleodna says...



i hear you, and i will recognize that, lots of guys (i think) cant really draw girls well cept sponson is and exception, hes just unnatural...
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Thu Dec 15, 2005 2:31 am
Sponson Light says...



Lips, I cant do lips, Im "jealous".

Girl needs more of a hip.
Add a light source and add the light.
The arm in the back, you drew the arm going straight down but the hand is right next to the hip, which means the elbow disappeared somewhere.
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Thu Dec 15, 2005 3:04 am
Fireweed says...



that is incredible. i love her eyes, they look all egyptian- like, and i like her funky shirt. oooh, and the belt. whats the character like? to me should looks spunky and head strong, maybe. BLAH, i wish i could draw!!

figures that most guys have trouble drawing girls, i cant draw guys worth crap. when i try they always look very feminine...

again, that is AWESOME. youre really good at expressions, and she looks quite realistic. =D>
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Thu Dec 15, 2005 3:35 am
zelithon says...



I hate to be the one to say this but... Her breasts need work. And so does her far shoulder. And her hip. And she looks kinda pregnant, maybe it wuolden't if you added the backround. Otherwise great! Did you use the computer to do it, if so what program?

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Tue Dec 20, 2005 8:10 pm
Jennafina says...



Wow, thats amazing! Her posture looks really real.

Her face is so expressive, she looks so alive, like she might start talking.
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