You need to finish this one before I can critique it properly. The basic outline you have looks nice and I think the bottom frame will be really interesting but finish it off and add the speech and such.
'This must be Thursday,' said Arthur to himself, sinking low over his beer. 'I never could get the hang of Thursdays.' — Douglas Adams, The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy
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