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Thu Sep 13, 2007 11:17 am
Shadowsun says...



Thats great! I wish I could draw like that... The shadows in the corner look great and the pose is fantastic and the cobweb looks a bit out of place but thats the only bit thats not so good.

The rest is great!

*returns to smoky corner*

~ Shadowsun
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Sun Sep 16, 2007 11:21 pm
crewgurl93 says...



Aw! Poor doll!
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Sun Sep 16, 2007 11:51 pm
She Writes says...



pretty!! i really like this. like, a lot. XD
  





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Sun Sep 23, 2007 5:40 pm
Kiba_the_Sequel says...



This was so well drawn!

I especially liked idea behind it.
Also, I like how this doll is more original looking.
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Thu Oct 04, 2007 1:44 pm
Zombiemonkey says...



thank you for all of your replies!^_^
the only reason the cobweb is in the picture, is because I was bored during class. I had wanted to put one those old sheet looking cobwebs, but had (have) no idea how to draw them.

I'd also like to point out that little_angel_fire wasn't much help at all. XP but like she pointed out, the scanner did do alot of the shading for me. I don't reallly mind though. ^_~.
when there is no room in hell, the dead will walk the earth.
  





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Mon Oct 08, 2007 1:15 am
Frederick101 says...



very cool, really detailed. the doll actually looks sad
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Tue Nov 20, 2007 2:47 pm
GingerLizzy says...



This is fantastique. ;)

Good work, but don't forget the four review rule.

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Tue Nov 20, 2007 9:17 pm
Kim says...



This is very well done, i didnt know you drew also.

you captured the depth with shading, everything looks like it is in porportion.

this is awesome . do you have any other drawings posted? i would love to see them.

kim
  





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Tue Nov 20, 2007 9:47 pm
Gwenevire says...



Very nice work!
I like how you made it look 3D!
I think you should consider making the limbs a little longer. Maybe it would give it a more rag doll affect.
Maybe you should round out the face a little more. It kinda looks like it is smiling.

Other than that...

Good work!
Genevieve
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Fri Nov 23, 2007 10:48 pm
hummingbird says...



This drawing is excellent, the shading is done well. I like the the cobweb, so sad the toy is not played with anymore.

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Fri Nov 23, 2007 11:06 pm
Wolf says...



Lol, if I had a doll like that, I would so play with it.

The shading is excellent, and it looks very three-dimensional. Everything looks very realistic.

I loved the cobwebs--even if I hadn't read the title, I would have guessed that it had something to do with forgetting.
The whole rather gloomy setting inferred that this was a toy nobody played with anymore, and that's way cool.

Great work!

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became everything i lost.


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Tue Nov 27, 2007 11:26 pm
my_wonderwall says...



it looks so sad. good job though!
  








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