Other Fiction is just for stories. There's a forum for artwork too. *moved to art forum*
I love the boy's face, especially his eyes and nose. The line work looks easy, and relaxed. The background, above his head is also really pretty.
his legs look a little short, proportionally. Also, if the wings are literal, they'd have to be a lot bigger to be able to hold him up without him constantly flapping them.
Really nice shading, it makes him look 3-D. Is that colored pencil? Pastel? Some of the background looks kind of like crayon. Maybe you could add a little shading to the wings?
The text looks a little out of place, but I like how you wrote it, with the arrows.
Thanks for posting!
-Jenna
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This is actually really good; I'm five years older than you, and I don't draw that well.
My only big crit. is that you really shouldn't have !s in the title, and especially not a lot of them. (Also, his pants/shoes look a little funky, but that's not such a big deal.)
I like it, but I think it should maybe be a little more professional. However, I am not big on anime so this could be what normal anime covers look like and I wouldn't know it.
You're doing well so far. I love the front cover and I haven't had time to properly read the begginning yet, but I have scanned and it looks pretty good! PM me when you do more.
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