I love all three dress, nice colours too. I think the first girl's left hand is not as great as her right hand, you could work on that by looking at your own or asking someone to pose.
The parasol in the second picture sticks out, looks as if you added it in just to get rid of some of the background. Why don't you have one of the girls holding it?
Thanks very much n__n
the parasol was really added as a background kind of thing; the picture is rather random and not meant to be a particular 'scene'.
I like the dress she's wearing in the first one. The wrinkles in the clothing are subtle, yet effective, and the colors are well done. The only thing that I would add to the first one are legs. ~_^
In the second drawing, the wings on the girl on the left are a bit too subtle. I couldn't see them until I saw the pic for the second time. But that might just be me not paying attention. The outline for the umbrella/parasol thing looks a bit odd, so you may want to fix that.
So pretty! I love the colors... and everything. ^_^!!
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