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Wed Jan 24, 2007 2:11 am
Broken Wings says...



Warning: Do not steal any of my artwork, even though it sucks.

1. This was a sketch that I decided to do on Photoshop and make it colorful and pretty.
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2. This was made for a friend, I'm Flyte, and that's my character with her pony dressed as a reindeer. Love them. My coloring skills were a little messy that day, I guess.
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3. I hate the girl in this one...yeah, that's the same girl in #2, but chibified.
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4. Fairy/angel thing...kinda cute. Made it for a friend.
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5. Another fairy thing that I did while bored.
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6. My kitties! ...Lineart from google, sadly. I was bored. And yes, there is a scar over the orange one's eye.
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7. Another character of mine. Also named Flyte...it's usually my name for things. I have one with more realistic hair, and one without it.
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Wed Jan 24, 2007 2:44 am
Sponson Light says...



Good! I hope you draw lots, its good practice drawing stuff repeatedly. But repetition can be bad, if you practice wrong that is.
I'd like to see your sketches, they usually offer a bit more insight right now.

The last one offers good design, and your characters don't seem flat, except for number 4, which is good.

The Reindeer Girl's arms are too short, and she is rather lopsided.
Unfortunatly, your style, looks a lot like everyone elses, down to the lines, shape, and even coloring style. But that should change with time, so its nothing to worry about.

Just keep practicing.

Oh and read this.
http://www.itchstudios.com/psg/art_tut.htm
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Wed Jan 24, 2007 3:06 am
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Sketches?

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m282 ... safumi.png
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m282 ... attoo1.jpg
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m282 ... ineart.jpg
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m282 ... ismall.jpg
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m282 ... etcher.jpg


My characters don't seem flat? I take that many different ways. Flat, as in 2d forms or whatever, unemotional, not enough color, ect...? Please explain that a bit more to me ( ^-^ sorry about my stupidity of art, I just draw, I don't study it)

...I didn't notice they were short. Thanks for pointing that out! And I know she's lopsided, I almost always draw like that because I have to have the paper tilted a little...I'm getting better though.

That's a nifty site! It's going on my favorites so I can check it out when it's not so late =^0^=
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Wed Jan 24, 2007 3:09 am
Fireweed says...



Are #4 and #5 holding flutes? It looks like they are...
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Wed Jan 24, 2007 4:34 pm
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Yeah...^-^ I play the flute, and it always seems to be a 'magical instrument' in stories and stuff. I dunno...I just like it. Besides, I can't draw any other instrument ^-^;
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Wed Jan 24, 2007 5:36 pm
Shine says...



Those were good.I liked the kitties.



Keep practising!:)
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Wed Jan 24, 2007 6:27 pm
Swires says...



They look ok to me!
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Wed Jan 24, 2007 7:34 pm
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I didn't draw the cats, I got the line art from google. But they are adorable, aren't they? ^-^

Thanks ANI, Phorcys <3
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Wed Jan 24, 2007 9:08 pm
Sponson Light says...



Flat art wise. Even though it is a 2d media, people and places can seem 3d, the best works make you want to step in and be there yourself.

Though, not all 2d is bad, if done right, it can look very very nice.

Just sayin'. If you do want to fix it, add more depth by shading, and warping the clothing and features just right. It's hard to explain. Just practice lots and strive to improve, and it'll come.
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Wed Jan 24, 2007 11:42 pm
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Nice!
  





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Thu Jan 25, 2007 12:16 am
Fireweed says...



Hurrah, a fellow flute player! ^_^ Nice pics. I love # 7's dress.
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Wed Jan 31, 2007 7:46 pm
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Haha, that dress was actually a mistake. Well, the design for it was. But...yeah, I like it too.
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Thu Feb 01, 2007 10:34 am
Myth says...



I also like No. 7's dress. I love how the colouring on the heart looks watercolour-ish.
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Sun Feb 04, 2007 7:49 am
Sohini says...



Th ekiities are soo cute.

i loved the ahppy holidays one too and th elast Flyte.
good work with the angel too
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