"Sometimes we see a cloud that's dragonish,
A vapour sometimes like a bear or lion,
A towered citadel, a pendant rock,
A forked mountain, or blue promontory,
With trees upon't that nod unto the world,And mock our eyes with air.."
I personally think it's too busy -- the branches at the front dominate the photo, and obscures the prettier images in the background. If the branches weren't there, it'd be a much lovelier photo. As it is, they ruin it for me. Too much in the foreground.
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I, personally, would not mind the branches if they were in focus. But missing the focal point there pretty much just threw the whole thing off--it kind of makes my eyes hurt.
I think it would be a decent picture if it didn't have the blurry branches in the front and if it didn't look like someone got too enthusiastic with the editing. It looks like it was lightened too much, making it look unnatural. You meed more meduim values in there. Sorry if I was harsh. Great picture otherwise. I love blueberries. ^_^
I too think its too busy. You should've chose either the branches or the berries not both. As it is, your focused on the berries and hte branches, while in the foreground, are out of focus, and thus clutter the veiw.
You cna probably crop it and what have you, but still, either one or the other not both. I think it would look cool focused on the branches with berries in the periphery, but thats just me.
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