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Sat Jan 06, 2007 9:31 am
Elizabeth says...



I got bored... I hope that you don't care what it look like.
... Just changed colors... so yeah... pick a favorite... I'll get working on the rest:

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Sat Jan 06, 2007 11:05 am
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The first one.
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Sat Jan 06, 2007 11:15 am
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first

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Sat Jan 06, 2007 11:38 pm
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third one. Her eyes are blue...:D
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Sun Jan 07, 2007 2:16 am
Elizabeth says...



If anybody would like me to fix any of these, longer hair, shorter hair, different hair, when I get bored enough I can work on them, especially for you :P
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Sun Jan 07, 2007 3:37 am
Jennafina says...



You're really good on paint, if that's what you used. :)

Anna-
She looks like the little mermaid.
Vanessa-
The grey hair makes her look ancient, but her face is still young. Why not make it white?
Lynn-
I'm not a huge fan of the spray paint tool for freckles. Maybe you could blend them, so they look more like pink cheeks vs. a rash? Also, the background clashes with her hair and eyes.

All of the triplets-
It looks like there's suposed to be wind in their hair, but I can't tell where it's coming from. It would be nice if you picked a wind direction and fixed it so no spikes of hair are pointing at it.

Their shoulders don't look quite right. They're too small, and then the slant looks weird. Also, a collerbone slopes the other way, I think. More U like than ^ like. If I'm making sense.

The folds on the shirt look randomized. Maybe you could give it a little more detail than a few scribbly lines?

I like them, though. They're cute, vaguely anime-ish. I think it might be cool if you painted their lips. Thanks for posting these!
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Sun Jan 07, 2007 5:50 am
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Ahh! The first one TOTALLY looks like a girl from one of my stories... Daisy's her name. Anyway, because of that, I lurve her.

Lynn sort of reminds me of Sadie except Sadie doesn't have blue eyes. :P
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Sun Jan 07, 2007 12:18 pm
Elizabeth says...



Meh... Shoulders were never my forte.
Wind sucks too :P

*sighs*

What colors eyes to Sadie have? I can make her, as well as that character that was supposed to be derived from "Paris Hilton" *Shivers*
  








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