"Sometimes we see a cloud that's dragonish,
A vapour sometimes like a bear or lion,
A towered citadel, a pendant rock,
A forked mountain, or blue promontory,
With trees upon't that nod unto the world,And mock our eyes with air.."
If anybody would like me to fix any of these, longer hair, shorter hair, different hair, when I get bored enough I can work on them, especially for you
*Is feeling generous today*
Thanks, I'm glad you liked them.
You're really good on paint, if that's what you used.
Anna-
She looks like the little mermaid.
Vanessa-
The grey hair makes her look ancient, but her face is still young. Why not make it white?
Lynn-
I'm not a huge fan of the spray paint tool for freckles. Maybe you could blend them, so they look more like pink cheeks vs. a rash? Also, the background clashes with her hair and eyes.
All of the triplets-
It looks like there's suposed to be wind in their hair, but I can't tell where it's coming from. It would be nice if you picked a wind direction and fixed it so no spikes of hair are pointing at it.
Their shoulders don't look quite right. They're too small, and then the slant looks weird. Also, a collerbone slopes the other way, I think. More U like than ^ like. If I'm making sense.
The folds on the shirt look randomized. Maybe you could give it a little more detail than a few scribbly lines?
I like them, though. They're cute, vaguely anime-ish. I think it might be cool if you painted their lips. Thanks for posting these!
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Ahh! The first one TOTALLY looks like a girl from one of my stories... Daisy's her name. Anyway, because of that, I lurve her.
Lynn sort of reminds me of Sadie except Sadie doesn't have blue eyes.
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