I liked it, but it moves to fast. I get what is happening, but it's just too fast. Try slowing down the changes, and maype move the sun acorss the sky and then moon. It looks kinda ood when the sun just turns into the moon.
"Maybe Senpai ate Yuka-tan's last bon-bon?" ----Stupei, Ace Defective
Its interesting.
As I said last time. I like the motion you added to your picture.
I think you could add some more detail and stuff.
The gun... Well I like to play Tomb Raider with her guns it fun.
But guns in general freak me out.
As the notifications drift in I stop and wonder. Why do they take so long? Do they have adventures we don't know about? I bet they do. When they come I will ask myself. What amazing adventure has this straggling notification been on? How far did it travel, and why didn't it take me? — TypoWithoutCoffee
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