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420 Frames Of Madness



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Sat Nov 25, 2006 10:48 am
Pivot_Master says...



four walls 4000 tonnes of steal many wepons much blood , even a crazy man that dances :shock: . prepare your self for the most horrific brutal fight ever depicted in pivot get ready for


420 FRAMES OF MADNESS


children died , ninjas died , giants died , dancers died , In the making of this crap

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27th November 2006
Ideas for a second parter to 420 frames actually with a story line Peace!
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Sat Nov 25, 2006 12:44 pm
Elizabeth says...



I died a little inside but you know what, it was ok. I liked it.. hee hee just placed the guys on the shriken and just left them there, cute :)
  





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Sat Nov 25, 2006 7:28 pm
Teeeeo. says...



I liked near the end when the guy was showing off, hit his head, and died XD
  





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Sat Nov 25, 2006 7:37 pm
Sureal says...



I like it :). Although some of the kicks are kindda slow/weak.
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Sat Nov 25, 2006 8:09 pm
Black Ghost says...



Mindless, but funny.
  





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Sat Nov 25, 2006 8:32 pm
Areida says...



That's something all right. :P
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Sun Nov 26, 2006 7:54 pm
Pivot_Master says...



*Hides low* hehe luckily noones sued me for the childs death
  





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Mon Nov 27, 2006 2:58 pm
tinny says...



*happy sigh* The joys of pointless violence!
please grant me my small wish; (love me to the marrow of my bones)
  








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