Young Writers Society

Dono already pointed out the weird hip... any other pointers?

And my house is empty right now, so I just took a pic instead of scanning... so the color is a bit off. Yes, I'm a bit scared in a big empty house.



it's based on a YWS member's drawing:


I found it in Dono's room... So I don't know who did it. Like my take on it?

The left leg (from my POV) looks awkward, as if she had an accident and it got twisted.

I like the bold lines.

OOOOOH.
Emma likes! Haha, it's really good.

Ok, I have some more time now!
I really dig the awesome anatomy, especially in the upper torso.

What I dont dig is that the eyes are really wide apart, and seem to be looking in different directions.

HA! I was there when you drew it!

Love the hair, awesome inking too. Her left hand looks a little funny, kinda like it's the palm of her her hand instead of the back. I think it's the shadow there that makes it looks a tad awkward.

Otherwise awesome drawing!