Young Writers Society

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I took a pic. of it and it didn't turn out so great, but here it is!

umm...or not

omg, ty

No problem.
Nickpick: The sun is rather... large. Strokes could be a little less random and more concerted. Like an orchestra needs each part to make a whole.

The water should be reflecting the sky, too, with reds and oranges and purples.

I like your color selection though, and you make a great atmosphere.

The water should be reflecting the sky, too, with reds and oranges and purples.

As a general thing, yes. But when I painted that it was A. Dark B. Wavy


That made it harder to draw becouse I couldn't see the waves, it was to dark, and yet I couldn't see the refletion, it was to wavy.

I sorta sucked

Wait... That's water? It doesn't really look like anything, just a wasteland or something but I do like the colours you used though the blue should be much lighter. Or have yellows and oranges, at that time of the sunset you wouldn't always see so much blue in the sky.

It looks to me like a sunset over snow, not water. I like the city in the distance a lot. If this were mine, I'd try to make the sun not smaller (it's stylized, not realism) but less lopsided.

I also really like the transition of colors from bright yellow to blue with pink and orange in between. That's cool.

In my recent studies in art I've found color is freekin difficult. What medium did you use?
I agree the water is too homoginous(sp?). Water has glints and glimmers and that stripe of brightness when sun sets behind it.
Did you do this from life or your imagination?

Most likely she used Acrylics. Look at the stroke, the color density, and its inability to fill in every nook and cranny like water colors.

She did this from life if you noticed the post about it being dark and the water was moving.