Young Writers Society

After lots of editing of the original, this picture is now child friendly...
and forum friendly... less than 18 years of age friendly.

He he Hillariouse very well made
wonderfull variations of colour and shading on the creases
one thing would be the cup it looks very felt tippy overall id give it a

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10/10 for good humour and great drawing

I dunno...
Bad Felt cup... -1
badly shaded in areas... -1
Missing right arm rest... -1
I quite like the face though... + 1.
Flawed sitting legs...-1.
7/10? Im too harsh on myself.

Actually the arm and legs are very realistic Like in real life you wouldnt have your arms and legs flailing everywhere
and the badly shaded areas are made up for with great shading around the bad area and the cups has hardly anything wrong with it i was going into too much detail

Pivot_Master wrote:Actually the arm and legs are very realistic Like in real life you wouldnt have your arms and legs flailing everywhere
and the badly shaded areas are made up for with great shading around the bad area and the cups has hardly anything wrong with it i was going into too much detail

Detail... good! Theres nothing wrong in pointing out flaws. I mean, its better that someone points out that youre not wearing any pants before you walk into public right?

Ill give you a minute.

She's too ... stiff. And it's "That's."

I want to see the 18+ one! XD

Me to *giggles like school girl*

I have a pretty crazy fetish, no you do not want to see the 18+.
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what like a foot fetish ewwwwwwwwwwwwww
i still wanna see it

I WANNA SEE THE 18+ ONE!
what WAS that in the cup...? o_O
*gasp* lewd images...
lol

The first one I actually like, it looks like it would make a good comic book. The second one confuses me greatly and makes me question my sanity? Lol.

Ooh, I like your art style. It reminds me of my favorite webcomic (VGCats).

And I, too, wonder what the 18+ version is like. o_o

I like the first one...I like how colorful it is!!! And the second one is interesting, I'm not quite sure what to say about it. Lol

yup his fetish is futanari gross