Young Writers Society

Heres an opener
explanation:
That majens brother commiting suicide after reciving threats from majens enemys to give majen up
The person at the end is majen before he begins his adventure
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Episode 1:
Haunted by the memoirs of his brother ,Majen decides to visit the sight of his death stunned as he finds the blood not even wiped away he fires on Jinn the scientist (Man who comes from the left) But that is not the end . Majens enemys come to kill Majen for trying to seek revenge on them but do not count on majens new magic
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Sorry for the uncropped view And i understand how choppy it ends trust me it looked better on the actual frames as i made them.

Join us next time on the adventure of a lifetime and we follow Majen on his magical adventures

Hehehe... I'm rating this an R for graphic violence.

This is interesting! I haven't seen a story here that has been played out like this before, in animated gifs. I half-thought they were flash before.

I will say hat in the first one, he had really beefy legs. But still.

Interesting stuff!

With such simple figures, you could at least fine tune the animations. Less choppy, things happening at the same time instead of one after the other.

Things like what youre doing is good though.

Well with the more custom figures its hard to not make it choppy and another thing would be the way it saves in GIF. it makes it choppy as a executioner

He he Jonathan Witts Rated : R
thanks snoink