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Tue Nov 07, 2006 2:15 am
Teeeeo. says...



I sketched my kitty :P

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Tue Nov 07, 2006 8:12 pm
x-Jammie-x says...



aww so sweet! :)
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Thu Nov 09, 2006 2:35 am
Karma says...



ooo! i like it a lot!
you may want to make the oval a bit less squiggly, but, hey, that's just me.
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Thu Nov 09, 2006 3:41 am
Via says...



I would just take the oval off, if I were you.

It would look more professional, in my opinion anyway.

Good, though!
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Thu Nov 09, 2006 3:43 am
Snoink says...



Very regal... I like his whiskers. :)
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Thu Nov 09, 2006 10:21 am
Myth says...



I actually like the cat in the oval, it reminds me of Victorian portraits. The cat looks quite shocked, as if you'd taken a picture of it but it is cute!
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Fri Nov 10, 2006 12:38 am
Teeeeo. says...



Snoink wrote:Very regal... I like his whiskers. :)


Meh my cat's a girl :P
And I WAS gonna put those thinner whisker things ABOVE the eyes, but it made her look... angry :P
  





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Fri Nov 10, 2006 2:36 am
Snoink says...



Oh... thus the name Lydia? :P

Yes, but cats look angry! They scratch hard too... *whimpers*
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Sat Nov 11, 2006 11:35 am
Sohini says...



Yay!!!!

*pats kitty*

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Tue Nov 14, 2006 1:45 am
Elizabeth says...



DO ONE WITH HER FACE PLANTED INTO A WALL BECAUSE SHE IS A SCARDEY CAT!!!
Better than most of your pictures. *kitty kitty kitty* :)
  





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Wed Nov 15, 2006 9:14 pm
Jennafina says...



That's cute! She looks kind of angery, though. :D

If you were going to change it, I'd try to make the ears a little more 3-D looking. This could be done, I think, with a line on the ears to make them look like they're not facing directly at the oval. Which I like. *See picture.

Also, I think she needs some more definition around her snout area, maybe some shading by my green line? And nostrels too.

These are just sugestions, it looks great.
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Wed Nov 15, 2006 10:03 pm
Pivot_Master says...



Very nice! Is ita long time piece of work or a quick skcetch a bit rough but still very good
  





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Thu Nov 16, 2006 2:49 am
Teeeeo. says...



Jennafina wrote:That's cute! She looks kind of angery, though. :D

If you were going to change it, I'd try to make the ears a little more 3-D looking. This could be done, I think, with a line on the ears to make them look like they're not facing directly at the oval. Which I like. *See picture.

Also, I think she needs some more definition around her snout area, maybe some shading by my green line? And nostrels too.

These are just sugestions, it looks great.


Wow... That WOULD make her look alot better!
YAY!
Now I just have to find it to fix it :P

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