I'm still working on improving and was looking for some criticism. If anyone knows what Creepypasta is, you won't recognize these two(I did a terrible job)
"It suddenly struck me that that tiny pea, pretty and blue, was the Earth. I put up my thumb and shut one eye, and my thumb blotted out the planet Earth. I didn't feel like a giant. I felt very, very small." — Neil Armstrong
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