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Mon Sep 04, 2006 7:25 pm
triple_blaze says...



A collage I made...

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One of my paintings..I like art. :)

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Mon Sep 04, 2006 7:31 pm
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Wow! Seriously, this stuff is amazing..

Hm.. as much as I love the painting, I think the collage is the best. I love how there are so many images on one sheet of paper but they all work with each other..

I'm afraid I can't say how to make any of this better since art isn't my speciality, but then I can't see anything that needs changing either.

Good work! :)

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Tue Sep 05, 2006 3:42 am
Sponson Light says...



Honestly, the painting is beautiful.
However, the sky is so bland compared to the scenery and horse, and the horse draws my eyes away from the scenery. Which isnt bad, but not good either. A second horse or figure along the trees and fence would have balanced it out.

The sky could use greater depths and more hues, the sunlight could be more intense.

If this was painted from life, it still needs a solid focus point.

Nice, nice job. I really like the fields.
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Tue Sep 05, 2006 6:33 am
Sohini says...



i'm baffled. you draw grandly.
the collage is pretty beautiful too.
and the painting is just tooooo gooood. i love the horse, the shades of the sky and the green pasture and everything else. makes me want to go inside that painting and pat the horse.
really great work!!
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Tue Sep 05, 2006 11:37 am
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I love the collage and all the 'hidden' pictures. As for the painting its brilliant though I would agree about the sky. I love your twisted trees.
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Wed Sep 06, 2006 3:09 am
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These are BRILLIANT. I looove the sky in the second piece. ^_^
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Fri Sep 15, 2006 9:32 pm
yoha_ahoy says...



Wonderful work. I have no complaints with the collage, but I would size it down for easier veiwing. I have to scroll all over to see the whole thing. It get's annoying. Otherwise, it's wonderful.

With the painting, I also think it's great. Although you have some blotches in the branches comeing down from the corner. It's bugging me. Otherwise, it's beautiful. :) Awesome.
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Sun Sep 24, 2006 3:54 pm
Ares says...



Those are very cool. Seriously, that's some pretty awesome stuff...

You've got talent.
  





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Mon Sep 25, 2006 6:20 pm
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They are aweome!!! You have a lot of talent and i am so jealous because i can't draw.
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Tue Sep 26, 2006 6:56 am
Snoink says...



For the painting, I think the orange and the green might contrast a little too much. but the collage is beautiful...
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Tue Sep 26, 2006 8:08 am
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Wow, that's beauteous stuff. I agree with Snoink though, the green in the field is a little too bright, maybe a soft shade would help it not contrast so much with the orange.

I love the look and colors of the collage.

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Mon Oct 02, 2006 3:32 am
BohemeMistress says...



wow, the first one made me cry (in a good way...i LOVED it) and the second one left me awestruck! amazing!
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