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So I just found a new love for origami!

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Paper turtle
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Paper fish
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Paper crane
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Paper swan
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Paper pig puppets (for Snoink!)
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Hi there :)
So... Honestly, I have absolutely nothing constructive to say about these, because I know zilch about origami.
HOWEVER- I DO want to say that I completely, utterly, wholly adore these. Great job, and I love the little photography shots too. :)

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Aww these are really adorable. Yeah, I don't really know how to critique origami...but I like the way you set the backgrounds up with them, that really helped add something to them. My favorite was the turtle, which I'm kind of in love with. <3 Anyway, this has been a lame review, but I really like these.

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StoryWeaver13 wrote:Aww these are really adorable. Yeah, I don't really know how to critique origami...but I like the way you set the backgrounds up with them, that really helped add something to them. My favorite was the turtle, which I'm kind of in love with. <3 Anyway, this has been a lame review, but I really like these.

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I absolutely like the turtle most! Those origami are so cute! And well done with the background, it really suits the origami.
I also love making animals origami so I really like it.

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Origami!
I can't comment on your paper-folding skills based on the photos, but I like the photo composition! They look like the sort of pictures you'd see in those instructional origami books. It's probably your camera, but I wish the colours were brighter. Maybe shine a spotlight of sorts on them? xD
Oh, and for the fish origami, the angle seems rather uninspired, I'd suggest you point your camera downwards and shoot with a tilted bird's eye view sort of thing.
But overall, I liked it! The turtle is my favourite :D
I prefer to fold flower origami though. Maybe you can try experimenting with them!
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Hey, red!

Awesome origami! I used to love doing origami back when I was kid. (Like it was sooo long ago)
However, the most complicated thing I could make was a crane and sometimes I still get mixed up with the steps. I'm quite impressed by your origami skills thought. You're pretty good. ^^

Now, as for the photographs, I'm not sure exactly why the sting is applied here. Is there a certain meaning it holds or was it just for fun? I think you could have played around with the strings a little more and have made it more creative and different, though. But the origami is really good...I wish I knew how to make a turtle. >.>

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These are so cute!!! I love the first one the best, but there all pretty awesome. :D
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Hey everyone,

Thanks sooo much for your kind words! Origami really is great, isn't it? But I have to admit, my photography skills are pretty average, so I'm really showing these off for the art and not so much for photography. And the string? I thought it looked kinda cool. haha. Oh, I shall try and lighten them up a bit too!

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Hey RedLeaf, CaptianRandom here.

You posted something new! I love these they are so cute and really good. I sometimes do origami and I’m not that good, my folds suck. Love the turtle. Can't wait for more of your work. Keep up the good work as well.

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Alright! Hello there, RedLeaf! By the way, I hope you are having a good first day of the New Year (I know I am!).

Now, this probably will not be too helpful, as I am no expert of origami. Actually, I am completely terrible at origami. However, I wanted to mention something I noticed. As beautiful as these all are, they all have little white corners folded up and such that distracts from the colorful patterns on the rest of the origami. I think you should color these white spaces in to make sure it doesn't distract from the origami.

Also, I was wondering why you used string in all these pictures, like PinkShearwater. I was all: does it have a special meaning, or no? But you said yourself it was just for fun. So, I personally would remove the string if it didn't hold any meaning, as it's distractive.

Hope this helps! Good work!

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Origami is the best! The pictures are really cool too. I actually love the string. It makes the composition look really interesting and stuff. And I like all the animals, though I think the fish can be better described as a whale. Because it looks more whaley to me, lol.

ALSO. You should totally do a pig. Yep.
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wow, they're adorably cute. however, i'd suggest that the third and fourth pictures be left just the way they are? i mean, in full color. it's dull to see only the origami shapes highlighted. however, it has a nice effect on the other hand. :D
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Oh gosh those are adorable!!
I tried origami a few times, it's pretty challenging. Which is why I like these so much you seem to know what you're doing.
The photography is great too :) nice angles.
My only gripe is that on the swan, a few places are in black and grey. I think the color would stand out moreso if you fixed that little bit. Other than that, very nice!
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THE PIGGIES ARE SO CUTE! <3 I would like this topic again, if I could, but I can't! But I wish I could! Wonderful job! :)

Also, I think there ought to be more string in that picture. I like your string!
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Like all of the others who posted on here, I know absolutly fricken nothing, So, I will just post what I think about each piece.
1 ~ 3/5 I don't really like this. Just seems boring
2 ~ 3.5/5 I like it better but seems poorly folded
3 ~4/5 favorite
4 ~ 3.5/5 nothing bad, just don't really like it
5 ~ 4/5 haha, cute little piggies.

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