Cuuute! Love the giant pen. And the banana. And how this guy needs to lose some weight. Is it okay if I leave one bitty suggestion? Add more contrast between the banana and the outfit. I didn't really spot the banana until later. Besides that, sweet job!
When your heart gets pierced with arrows, don't rip them out and pierce those around you in retribution for your hurt. You'll only unnecessarily wound others and bleed to death yourself. — LadyMysterio